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Post by {Fawn} on Oct 16, 2010 18:58:48 GMT -5
Name: Fawn Lancer
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Physical Description: Fawn has light brown hair, the color of deers pelt, which is straight and drapes down to slightly below her shoulders. Her eyes are a piercing bright green. Her skin on her 5'7" body is always pale. She is very skinny, so most people think she deathly ill in poor lighting.
Personality Description: This young girl is very shy at first. Once she knows someone though, she's more open, but still hides most of her thoughts. This helps her in battle, never revealing her weaknesses to others.
History: Fawn wasn't raised in Lace City, but a town far from there. Her mother had been born here though, but moved when she had discovered she was pregnant, wanting a better life for her cild than she had had. But her daughter had different plans. She left her mother and father when she was 15, always having been raised to be like a proper lady, but hating it. Once she hit the streets of this neighborhood, she loved it. The violence, the gangs. She still preferred to be by herself, but never minded anothers company. She doesn't smoke, but like a drink once in a while.
Preferred Gang/Rank: Loner
Starting Weapons(3 max): Fawn carries 2 switchblades, one in the butt-pocket of her jeans, the other in the breast pocket of her jacket.
Other: None
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Post by Jazmin on Oct 16, 2010 19:18:05 GMT -5
Well, well, well, it all sounds very good. She sounds like a very interesting girl. But you must watch for those nasty punctuation marks. It's nothing serious, so don't fret. And another is a word, so you didn't need to put an-other.
Welcome to Lace City, Ms. Fawn.
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Post by {Fawn} on Oct 16, 2010 19:25:51 GMT -5
Well my computer said it was wrong. And I'll add the last name in a second.
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Post by Jazmin on Oct 16, 2010 19:36:08 GMT -5
Looks perfect.
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