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Post by Bob Jenkins on Oct 2, 2010 23:01:17 GMT -5
Name: Bob Jenkins
Age: 38
Gender: Male
Physical Description: Bob is a tall, muscle clad, heavily built man with thick, black hair, deep brown eyes that seem like they are looking strait into your soul, and a wicked smile that shows teeth that look as if the could chew through solid steel.
Personality Description: He has a very short temper and is bipolar. Preferred Gang and Rank: He prefers to be a Loner because he does not trust very many people.
Starting Weapons: He has a 50 caliber Assault Rifle, an A.K.-47, and a 20 caliber pistol.
Other: He also makes, and sells guns like the 50 caliber Assault Rifle he owns to get by and has to constantly watch his back for cops and other people that want to jail, capture, or kill him.
History: One day, when he was trying to cut a deal with a customer that was looking for a 50 caliber for no particular reason, got mad about the price that Bob was asking for. so he put a bullet in the gun and shot and killed Bobs wife. And ever since that day, Bob has done every thing possible to track down the man that killed his wife and take his revenge.
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Post by Jazmin on Oct 2, 2010 23:09:17 GMT -5
Alright, everything looks fine. Since you're new and inexperienced, I'll let this one flaw slide: It's a little short. From now on, you should aim for more detail.
Welcome to Lace City, Mr. Jenkins.
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Post by Bob Jenkins on Oct 2, 2010 23:12:05 GMT -5
Thank you, Jaz. ;D
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